Score: 8

"Nice, good work."

submission: Stickman YoYo

date: May 23, 2006

Im amazed, usally I hate these type of short small animations. Thou this one I liked, nice, smooth, and simple. Good work for a first submision, keep it up you got potential.

Only one specific flaw about it. As an old yo-yo user the last move that he pulled off; aroung the world. His arms isnt really supposed to move. Flick it out above you, letting it swing around until it completes a 360 degree revolution and flick it back. During the whole move youre arm is supposed to stay in place and not actually move. I know it's sorta specific but you do have to take these things in mind.

Score: 1

"hmmm...."

submission: "call me Super Vegito!"

date: May 11, 2006

I dont know why but this seems like a complete and utter rip off. Scenes were to exact to the tv show to be original. Way to short as it is. Those of us who havent seen dragon ball z wouldnt get it. Complete zero for lack of originality. Sorry but try harder.

Score: 3

"Not worth anyones time..."

submission: Short FBF Collab

date: May 4, 2006

The first one had pure randomness, and problably the only animation that had the most FBF. But nevertheless pointless.
The second one, scribbles and chicken scratch. No skills whatsoever. Anybody can do lines and hair meshe.
Third one hardly had any FBF in it. It was mostly tweens. Very dissapointing.
Fourth was good FBF but had crappy animation. I suspect most of it was image copy.
Last one deserves to be last. Like I said anybody can do moving lines or racing dots from place to place. To much time was spent on the backround rather the animation.

Frame By Frame never always consisted of moving dots or streaming lines. Thats all bull.The whole thing was a let down, seriously. Dont know why this flash is still alive. Stick figure animations have more FBF than this entire flash.

Score: 8

"Interesting..."

submission: The Alien Bit

date: August 23, 2005

I admit this one was funny. But than again its pretty plain and flat. I dont really understand the odd colors such as purple or red on the earth. The aliens...well what can I say about them...they hardly look like they can operate a ship. Then again the ship looked alive to me O.o. The comment on how the world is upside down. Well who said space had a down and an up? Space is 360 in every gosh darn direction. I never understood why spaceships in movies or t.v. shows have all their ships facing the same way. Its kinda unlogical. But...eh...Good movie love the last line..."advanced and benelovent". XD

Score: 4

"Need more plot."

submission: team opps vs. team alpha

date: August 19, 2005

Lets sum this up. The music. Okay well its good but then again not good. The thing about this particular song is that it lingers between tension and calm. Its a good intro song but for a battle scene its just dont fit. Okay the battles. The blade battle was...well out of place. If there headed into a fight knowing the opponent has guns, I see really no use to bring a sword or even an axe which would be alot heavier. The battleitself was dissapointing, needs more movement. The gun and shotgun battle. Was well awkward an unlogical. You run into a fight head on especially face to face with a gun. The plain explosion would have been quicker and the entire plane would problably be blown. You know istead of just peaces. They need cover, distance. Lastly the fist fight. Okay well if they had these amazing high speed power and skill, I doubt they need any type of ammunitions. The whole death by axe thing was also dissapointing I'm pretty he could have dodged that. The whole action scene was sort of dull and slow. You need more instensity, more tension. personify the characters a bit. Make them feel, express emitions.

Second of all if youre trying to empress anybody or gain any rep. Dont do it with stick figs. Newgrounds has evolved from stick fig flashes, for good reason. Ive took notice of youre past sprite movies. They seem alright, thou a bit repeatative. You could make a nice series. But enough of the killingspree theme it becomes a bore.

Score: 9

"Great flash, short but halarious."

submission: Green Brown

date: July 19, 2005

Even thou youre art is sketchy(which I like) I cant express how good and smooth youre characters movements are.This flash was great. At first I didnt know what to think. Green standing there casually. Then after a sudden push a fight starts, the music went right along with it. Made it comical and stated that the fight wasnt really serious. Loved the way brown acts like if nothing happend with that dorky expression. The humor was clearly on target. The fight scene was alright, a bit quick though but good overall. What surprised me was the end. Ended up to be just a game, and then again it just really makes you think.
So overall a nine. Great short, funny and a great concept.